Poem: False Sunrise (haiku in 3 variations)

False sunrise mistake

it turned out to be a hoax

coaxed with foolish hope

Nothing to discuss

There’s nothing left to adorn

no more illusions

Codependent dope

You thought you could protect him

Save yourself instead.

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poetryfromtheinkwell says:

January 10, 2019 at 2:06 am

Love these…each one as good as the other!

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1. Judy Eun Kyung Kim says:
  
  January 10, 2019 at 3:36 am
  
  An awesome comment from a great poet, thank you for your kind opinion!
  
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  1. poetryfromtheinkwell says:
    
    January 10, 2019 at 7:44 pm
    
    Aw, so humbling you are. Yyu are kindly welcome.
    
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Judy Eun Kyung Kim says:

January 10, 2019 at 10:29 pm

Maybe the more gifted, the more humble? so cool to appreciate and be appreciated. Thanks again.

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